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My article: In-Depth breakdown Colts-Chiefs.
https://fullpresscoverage.com/2019/0...nal-breakdown/
In this article, I go deep into some concerning stats on both teams, and dissect what I feel is a game that can go 2 different ways. I do like both teams in this match-up. 1 is the most prolific offense in the NFL, with one of the worst defenses (save the pass rush), And the other is a top 5 offense, with a top 11 defense that has allowed the least amount of points scored in the NFL since week 7. Give a read, like, comment, share..please share...lol |
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Fyi
there is a mistake in the article. My editor accidentally doubled a sentence and never fixed it when he posted.Just letting you know, that one is NOT on me..lol
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Also, If you or anyone ever do have issues, let me know. We did have a short down time last night due to maintenance. Last edited by Lawrence Owen; 01-11-2019 at 09:30 AM. |
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smitty46953 (01-11-2019) |
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If you have anything to add
feel free to let me know. I do think if it snows tomorrow, it is very much in Indy's favor. Indoor team or not, they've practiced outside all week in the colts and cold/snow favors the stronger run team.
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You need a new editor - that's far from the only mistake, and I'm only through the first 3 paragraphs.
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FatDT (01-11-2019) |
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Yeah there are quite a few grammatical mistakes in there
And I agree with what you say, but not a huge amount of new insight. I would add I think the Colts will need a few turnovers as stops on KC to win this game. I think they will need about 35 +minutes TOP and +2 in turnovers to have a chance. |
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I think an AP Style book would help. Get the mechanics tight, then work on adding your own personal flair. I am sometimes an ass on here but you are clearly passionate enough to write articles so please take this as constructive criticism. I minored in journalism, meaning I was at one time a journalism major but decided I didn't like it, and had enough credits for a minor after changing majors.
With the internet, the world is wide-open for writers. You have football experience and people are hungry for deeper writing that teaches them things about the game and their team that they don't know. If you get the writing itself tight and your voice is clear you can take yourself somewhere. GBB could probably say more about this given his experience at BR. |
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chiefs, colts, nfl, playoff |
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